zzz123xxx 发表于 2011-1-4 11:35   全显示 1楼
又见好文一篇
我觉得有三点可以说一说：
1、不是长篇 但是写出了交换的感觉 码个几万字随便写一篇文章不难 难在情节如何在较少的字数中突出出来 本篇做到了
2、既然是交换文 男女主角的戏份不宜相差过大 所以读下来可以明显发现 微微和晨的戏份相差太大 难怪ls有文友说虎头蛇尾的感觉
3、晨跟黄明发展的太快了吧 来点人妻的娇羞 欲拒还迎就更好了
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